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Why is his life like this... his liege probably doesn't mean for him to be visibly following a child's orders, right.  Right?

"I don't suppose you've got a copy of that you can loan with a return-deposit for an hour so I can look through it and think?  Or two copies, it'll keep Kellum busy.  He's a big reader for his age, has never hurt a book."

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Why is his life like this... his liege probably doesn't mean for him to be visibly following a child's orders, right.  Right?

He's not really sure he is picking up all intended subtext.

"I don't suppose you've got a copy of that you can loan with a return-deposit for an hour so I can look through it and think?  Or two copies, it'll keep Kellum busy.  He's a big reader for his age, has never hurt a book."

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Why is his life like this... his liege probably doesn't mean for him to be visibly following a child's orders, right.  Right?

He's not really sure he is picking up all intended subtext.  ...Maybe she found a different element she wants?

"I don't suppose you've got a copy of that you can loan with a return-deposit for an hour so I can look through it and think?  Or two copies, it'll keep Kellum busy.  He's a big reader for his age, has never hurt a book."