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The guy is looking at her like he might have something to say but is, you know, scared of this terrifying person in a way where he would not have totally unconflicted feelings if she were to speak to him in a scathing tone and hand out some sort of punishment for his insolence in looking at him?  Or possibly Opalyn is just imagining that part.

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The guy is looking at her like he might have something to say but is, you know, scared of this terrifying person in a way where he would not have totally unconflicted feelings if she were to speak to him in a scathing tone and hand out some sort of punishment for his insolence in looking at her?  Or possibly Opalyn is just imagining that part.

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The guy is looking at her like he might have something to say but is, you know, scared of this terrifying person in a way where he would not have totally unconflicted feelings if she were to speak to him in a scathing tone and hand out some sort of punishment for his insolence in looking at her?  Or possibly Opalyn is just imagining that part.

Three of the women look more subdued.  One of them is sidling nervously toward the blushing one who just got added to the group, possibly to offer comfort, possibly to offer something else.

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The guy is looking at her like he might have something to say but is, you know, scared of this terrifying person in a way where he would not have totally unconflicted feelings if she were to speak to him in a scathing tone and hand out some sort of punishment for his insolence in looking at her?  Or possibly Opalyn is just imagining that part.

Three of the women look more subdued.  The fourth is sidling nervously toward the blushing one who just got added to the group, possibly to offer comfort, possibly to offer something else.

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The guy is looking at her like he might have something to say but is, you know, scared of this terrifying person in a way where he would not have totally unconflicted feelings if she were to speak to him in a scathing tone and hand out some sort of punishment for his insolence in looking at her?  Or possibly Opalyn is just imagining that part.

Two of the women look more subdued.  The third is sidling nervously toward the blushing fourth who just got added to the group, possibly to offer comfort, possibly to offer something else.