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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, someone has to fuel the lightlines.  Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody cares about that."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to catch them and send them to us.  Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody cares about that."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to catch them and send them to us.  Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody cares about that."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to catch them and send them to us."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who didn't deserve it, now, that makes you look weak, gullible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to catch them and send them to us."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked you, now, that makes you look weak, gullible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to catch them and send them to us."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked you, now, that makes you look contemptible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida, so he gives us a budget and we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals and other planets have a reason to send them to us when they catch them."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked you, now, that makes you look contemptible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida.  He gives us a budget, we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals, other planets have a reason to send them to us after catching them."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked you, now, that makes you look contemptible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and really doesn't know at least some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida.  He gives us a budget, we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals, other planets have a reason to send them to us after catching them."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked us, now, that makes a bureaucrat look contemptible."

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(hidden thoughts) He doesn't quite see where she's aiming at, here, which is more evidence that she's from some weird sheltered noble family and is asking because she really doesn't know some of what's going on around her.  Actually, he might've not known the real answer to that either, when he was as young as she looks.

"What was the name of that planet... Mayvos, right.  Obvious answer, Emperor wants the lightlines kept alive and also for overpowered idiots to not wreck Eldrida.  He gives us a budget, we pay for ranked-sorcerer criminals, other planets have a reason to send them to us after catching them."

"Subtle answer?  The fact that we pay for criminals means that the system has a reason to care if somebody sends us ridiculous papers about a bandit queen.  Means that bureaucrats perk up and go, ah, there's money involved, somebody's trying to get money out of us.  If it was just a question of whether the papers are true and if you ought to be in here or not, well, nobody really cares about that.  Imprisoning an innocent person doesn't make the system look weak, it makes it look strong enough not to give a shit.  But sending out money to people who tricked us, now, that makes a bureaucrat look contemptible."