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This grand working of dark sorcery would probably have worked better if it was much more familiar to you and had, like, 80% less instinctive casting time, and you were not trying to do it with ONE ARM while also in the middle of DODGING A SWORD.

An enormous terrifying surge of dark magical power blasts out of you in a perfect sphere, aimed in the WRONG DIRECTION along as many as SEVERAL OTHER DIMENSIONS BESIDES THE USUAL THREE.  

Also your body does manage to dodge the sword, after your sphere heads out in the wrong dimensional direction.  But behind that swung sword is also a mailed armored fist coming at where a highly trained fighter might predict your head would be--

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This grand working of dark simultaneous-button-mashing sorcery would probably have worked better if the combined spell was more familiar to you and had, like, 80% less instinctive casting time, and you were not trying to do it with ONE ARM while also in the middle of DODGING A SWORD.

An enormous terrifying surge of dark magical power blasts out of you in a perfect sphere, aimed in the WRONG DIRECTION along as many as SEVERAL OTHER DIMENSIONS BESIDES THE USUAL THREE.  

Also your body does manage to dodge the sword, after your sphere heads out in the wrong dimensional direction.  But behind that swung sword is also a mailed armored fist coming at where a highly trained fighter might predict your head would be--

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This grand working of dark-sorcerous-button-mashing would probably have worked better if the combined spell was more familiar to you and had, like, 80% less instinctive casting time, and you were not trying to do it with ONE ARM while also in the middle of DODGING A SWORD.

An enormous terrifying surge of dark magical power blasts out of you in a perfect sphere, aimed in the WRONG DIRECTION along as many as SEVERAL OTHER DIMENSIONS BESIDES THE USUAL THREE.  

Also your body does manage to dodge the sword, after your sphere heads out in the wrong dimensional direction.  But behind that swung sword is also a mailed armored fist coming at where a highly trained fighter might predict your head would be--

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This grand working of dark-sorcerous-button-mashing would probably have worked better if the combined spell was more familiar to you and had, like, 80% less instinctive casting time, and you were not trying to do it with ONE ARM while also in the middle of DODGING A SWORD.

An enormous terrifying surge of dark magical power blasts out of you in a perfect sphere, aimed in the WRONG DIRECTION along as many as SEVERAL OTHER DIMENSIONS BESIDES THE USUAL THREE.  

Also your body does manage to dodge the sword, after your sphere heads out in the wrong dimensional direction.  But behind that swung sword is also a mailed armored fist coming at where a highly trained fighter might predict your head would be--