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"I was going to ask you to try escorting me to Emily's while continuing to talk, in case that'd save me the clock-time.  But on reflection that might cost you time walking back by yourself.  I'm not asking you to not open your tavern exactly at noon.  Not just yet.  We probably want to take things a little slow, where we push using the spark, so that if something goes wrong for the first time it'll be a less large thing and we'll have an idea of where to trace it.  Emily had a wise and sparky point about not going for 999 small fish tacos immediately.  I made sure to farm parsnips this morning even though I might have a different source of money.  That's why I'm emphasizing that the saloon won't fail if we go slow."

"I'll follow you in after a moment.  I want to see if there's people inside your saloon the moment you open for business, even though nobody else seems to be standing around waiting to step in."

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"I was going to ask you to try escorting me to Emily's while continuing to talk, in case that'd save me the clock-time.  But on reflection that might cost you time walking back by yourself.  I'm not asking you to not open your tavern exactly at noon.  Not just yet.  We probably want to take things a little slow, where we push using the spark, so that if something goes wrong for the first time it'll be a less large thing and we'll have an idea of where to trace it.  Emily had a wise and sparky point about not going for 999 small fish tacos immediately.  I made sure to farm parsnips this morning even though I might have a different source of money.  That's why I'm emphasizing that the saloon won't fail if we go slow."  Oliver hopes he is able to remember this point himself.  It is not really in his nature and he tends to be forgetful about things that aren't in his nature.

"I'll follow you in after a moment.  I want to see if there's people inside your saloon the moment you open for business, even though nobody else seems to be standing around waiting to step in."

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"I was going to ask you to try escorting me to Emily's while continuing to talk, in case that'd save me the clock-time.  But on reflection that might cost you time walking back by yourself.  I'm not asking you to not open your tavern exactly at noon.  Not just yet.  We probably want to take things a little slow, where we push using the spark, so that if something goes wrong for the first time it'll be a less large thing and we'll have an idea of where to trace it.  Emily had a wise and sparky point about not going for 999 small fish tacos immediately.  I made sure to farm parsnips this morning even though I might have a different source of money.  That's why I'm emphasizing that the saloon won't fail if we go slow."  Oliver hopes he is able to remember this point himself.  It is not really in his nature and he tends to be forgetful about things that aren't in his nature.  But, he should at least give this good advice to other people!

"I'll follow you in after a moment.  I want to see if there's people inside your saloon the moment you open for business, even though nobody else seems to be standing around waiting to step in."