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Long ago, at least as mortals count time, a young human girl knew (it was not really a matter of deciding) that the right thing to do was spend all her life trying to fix everything everywhere.  And some time after that, she knew the right thing to do was become a god and go on trying to fix everything everywhere; though she didn't think that, even as a god, she would live to see it fixed...

A furious blaze of light, shining brighter than it did in Heaven, enters into Zon-Kuthon's vault where a great Evil lies wounded and helpless.

Some other possible god of paladins might've found this part difficult, contrary to Their domain; but Iomedae never was the god of fighting Evil.

 

 

She eats Him.

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Long ago, at least as mortals count time, a young human girl knew (it was not really a matter of deciding) that the right thing to do was spend all her life trying to fix everything everywhere.  And some time after that, she knew the right thing to do was become a god and go on trying to fix everything everywhere; though she didn't think that, even as a god, she would live to see it fixed...

A furious blaze of light, shining brighter than it did in Heaven, enters into Zon-Kuthon's vault where a great Evil lies wounded and helpless.

Some other possible god of paladins might've found this part difficult, contrary to Their domain; but Iomedae never was the god of fighting Evil.

 

 

She is going to start to eat Him.

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Long ago, at least as mortals count time, a young human girl knew (it was not really a matter of deciding) that the right thing to do was spend all her life trying to fix everything everywhere.  And some time after that, she knew the right thing to do was become a god and go on trying to fix everything everywhere; though she didn't think that, even as a god, she would live to see it fixed...

A furious blaze of light, shining brighter than it did in Heaven, enters into Zon-Kuthon's vault where a great Evil lies wounded and helpless.

Some other possible god of paladins might've found this part difficult, contrary to Their domain; but Iomedae never was the god of fighting Evil.

 

 

She falls on Him like a mouse nibbling into a comatose elephant.