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She would protest, say something, persuade him somehow, maybe even just ask the question, if she could speak at all.

 

If this doesn't end well, it's all Aspexia's fault for insisting that Abrogail wait for so long before doing anything.

 

 

She's a trope-girl - isn't she?  Her story cannot end like this.  It would lack all drama.

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She would protest, say something, persuade him somehow, maybe even just ask the question, if she could speak at all.

 

If this doesn't end well, it's all Aspexia's fault for insisting that Abrogail wait for so long before doing anything.

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She would protest, say something, persuade him somehow, maybe even just ask the seductively frightened question 'What are you doing to me?', if she could speak at all.

 

If this doesn't end well, it's all Aspexia's fault for insisting that Abrogail wait for so long before doing anything.

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She would protest, say something, persuade him somehow, maybe ask the seductively frightened question 'What are you doing to me?', if she could speak at all.

 

If this doesn't end well, it's all Aspexia's fault for insisting that Abrogail wait paralyzed and frightened in her palace instead of playing the game like a sane person.

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She would protest, say something, persuade him somehow, maybe ask the seductively frightened question 'What are you doing to me?', if she could speak and had Splendour.

 

If this doesn't end well, it's all Aspexia's fault for insisting that Abrogail wait paralyzed and frightened in her palace instead of playing the game like a sane person.