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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place; and the magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all.  There's not enough huge scribbling.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards, surely, but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all, right.  There's not enough huge scribbling.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards, surely, but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all, right.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards, surely, but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all, right.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.

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It looks like a child's concept of a magic weapon that couldn't possibly work.

It contains no spellsilver, hasn't been imbued with the potential that spellsilver carries; there's just magic stuck to it for no visible reason, like a few bits of somebody's scaffold got stuck in there and impossibly stayed in place.  And that magic has some unfamiliar - color, texture, flavor, something, that Carissa has never seen and cannot offhand imagine any way to do to a piece of magic on purpose by Golarion methods.

The foreign magic is structured - carelessly, sloppily, in huge scribbles, not just by Carissa's standards, surely, but by the standards of anyone in Golarion who could make a magic item at all, right.  Any kind of spell you could cast by pumping mana through this awful scribble would have to be three spell circles simpler than a cantrip, and even then it couldn't work unless the mana itself was somehow just way easier to work with and shape into spells.