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Befutig Safiza Uj-alet flies above the city as Efreet do, and lets the slave-girl, Pilar Pineda, look down to witness it, that she may be duly awed by the grandeur of the Efreet.  This is the world, and he is showing it to her.

To his mansion he takes her, a noble mansion befitting an Efreet.

To his bedchambers he takes the slave-girl, and makes her scream with pain and pleasure both.

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Befutig Safiza Uj-alet flies above the city as Efreet do, and lets the slave-girl, Pilar Pineda, look down to witness it, that she may be duly awed by the grandeur of the Efreet.  This is the world, and he is showing it to her.

To his mansion he takes her, a noble mansion befitting a noble Efreeti.

To his bedchambers he takes the slave-girl, and makes her scream with pain and pleasure both.