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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is worse - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.  They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better fucking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is worse - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.  They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is making her nauseous - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.  They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is making her nauseous - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.  They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is making her nauseous - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.

They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - issued multiple commands about that - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is making her nauseous - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.

They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - issued multiple commands about that - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  Because Sevar wanted to preserve the chance that Cheliax and he could ally, if he came to his senses and went Evil?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.

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It's strange, it's surprising, that Pilar can be feeling - alongside other horrors, she's obviously horrified that Asmodeus might lose Cheliax, of course she is, and hearing that it depends on her own choices is making her nauseous - feeling wounded that Keltham would do that to Cheliax.

They - Sevar tried so hard to not hurt Keltham, Keltham's feelings, more than she had to - issued multiple commands about that - does Keltham have any idea what Cheliax and Sevar could've done to him, without breaking any of Asmodeus's directives, if they had actually wanted to crush his spirit?  Because Sevar wanted to preserve the chance that Cheliax and Keltham could ally, if he grew up and went Evil?  And then, Keltham turns around and does this to them?  They'd have been better off fucking breaking him.