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"I can take care of myself.  Yaisa and Korva Tallandria.  The Queen told Keltham that everything he valued in Cheliax would be waiting for him when he came back.  Yaisa's obvious.  I don't know why Keltham asked for Korva to come with him but I can see a trope hook when it slaps me in the face.  If either of them get placed in apparent character jeopardy by Security it sets up a plot hook for Keltham to come back and rescue them, and if they get traumatized by Security it trashes the Queen's plan to set up a storyline where Keltham has to come back to Cheliax."

"You know fucking well that neither Maillol or Subirachs are actually keeping track of any of that.  They wish tropes didn't exist and they do not have the ilani training to, not just live in the wish-world inside their heads.  No matter how much you wish they were keeping track of everything and you didn't have to.  That is also not reality."

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"I can take care of myself.  Yaisa Castilla and Korva Tallandria.  The Queen told Keltham that everything he valued in Cheliax would be waiting for him when he came back.  Yaisa's obvious.  I don't know why Keltham asked for Korva to come with him but I can see a trope hook when it slaps me in the face.  If either of them get placed in apparent character jeopardy by Security it sets up a plot hook for Keltham to come back and rescue them, and if they get traumatized by Security it trashes the Queen's plan to set up a storyline where Keltham has to come back to Cheliax."

"You know fucking well that neither Maillol nor Subirachs nor Abarco are actually keeping track of any of that.  They wish tropes didn't exist and they do not have the ilani training to, not just live in the wish-world inside their heads.  No matter how much you wish they were keeping track of everything and you didn't have to.  That is also not reality."

"I checked.  Yaisa has already been - having sex with Security under questionable circumstances that would be less ambiguously trope-catastrophic if she weren't Yaisa, but they were definitely pressuring her and it's not a good sign of anybody keeping track of things."

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"I can take care of myself.  Yaisa Castilla and Korva Tallandria.  The Queen told Keltham that everything he valued in Cheliax would be waiting for him when he came back.  Yaisa's obvious.  I don't know why Keltham asked for Korva to come with him but I can see a trope when it slaps me in the face.  If either of them get placed in apparent character jeopardy by Security it sets up a plot hook for Keltham to come back and rescue them, and if they get traumatized by Security it trashes the Queen's plan to set up a storyline where Keltham has to come back to Cheliax."

"You know fucking well that neither Maillol nor Subirachs nor Abarco are actually keeping track of any of that.  They wish tropes didn't exist and they do not have the ilani training to, not just live in the wish-world inside their heads.  No matter how much you wish they were keeping track of everything and you didn't have to.  That is also not reality."

"I checked.  Yaisa has already been - having sex with Security under questionable circumstances that would be less ambiguously trope-catastrophic if she weren't Yaisa, but they were definitely pressuring her and it's not a good sign of anybody keeping track of things."

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"I can take care of myself.  Yaisa Castilla and Korva Tallandria.  The Queen told Keltham that everything he valued in Cheliax would be waiting for him when he came back.  Yaisa's obvious.  I don't know why Keltham asked for Korva to come with him but I can see a trope when it slaps me in the face.  If either of them get placed in apparent character jeopardy by Security it sets up a plot hook for Keltham to come back and rescue them, and if they get traumatized by Security it trashes the Queen's plan to set up a storyline where Keltham has to come back to Cheliax."

"You know fucking well that neither Maillol nor Subirachs nor Abarco are actually keeping track of any of that.  They wish tropes didn't exist and they do not have the ilani training to, not just live in the wish-world inside their heads.  No matter how much you wish they were keeping track of everything and you didn't have to.  That is also not reality."

"I checked.  Yaisa has already been - having sex with Security under questionable circumstances that would be less ambiguously trope-catastrophic if she weren't Yaisa, but they were definitely pressuring her and it's not a good sign of anybody keeping track of things."

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"I can take care of myself.  Yaisa Castilla and Korva Tallandria.  The Queen told Keltham that everything he valued in Cheliax would be waiting for him when he came back.  Yaisa's obvious.  I don't know why Keltham asked for Korva to come with him but I can see a trope when it slaps me in the face.  If either of them get placed in apparent character jeopardy by Security it sets up a plot hook for Keltham to come back and rescue them, and if they get traumatized by Security it trashes the Queen's planned storyline."

"You know fucking well that neither Maillol nor Subirachs nor Abarco are actually keeping track of any of that.  They wish tropes didn't exist and they do not have the ilani training to, not just live in the wish-world inside their heads.  No matter how much you wish they were keeping track of everything and you didn't have to.  That is also not reality."

"I checked.  Yaisa has already been - having sex with Security under questionable circumstances that would be less ambiguously trope-catastrophic if she weren't Yaisa, but they were definitely pressuring her and it's not a good sign of anybody keeping track of things."