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Peranza is still a bit dizzy, and also frightened, she knows very well that she's not in Asmodia's league, let alone Pilar Pineda's.  She's not even second-circle, well, most students aren't, but Asmodia and Pilar are - and Ione Sala, who, twisting her head around, Peranza can see curled up in a corner unconscious, definitely also is, even if she's not as aggressive as the others -

Peranza realizes, then, that whatever is happening around her, she probably does not actually belong in this group, and is probably going to die quite soon.

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Peranza is still a bit dizzy, and also frightened, she knows very well that she's not in Asmodia's league, let alone Pilar Pineda's.  She's not even second-circle, well, most students aren't, but Asmodia and Pilar are - and Ione Sala, who, twisting her head around, Peranza can see curled up in a corner unconscious, definitely also is, even if she's not as aggressive as the others -

Peranza realizes, then, that whatever is happening around her, she probably does not actually belong in this group, and is probably going to die horribly quite soon.

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Peranza is still a bit dizzy, and also frightened, she knows very well that she's not in Asmodia's league, let alone Pilar Pineda's.  She's not even second-circle, well, most students aren't, but Asmodia and Pilar are - and Ione Sala, who, twisting her head around, Peranza can see curled up in a corner unconscious, definitely also is, even if she's not as aggressive as the others -

Peranza realizes, then, that whatever is happening around her, she does not actually belong in this group, and is probably going to die horribly quite soon.

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Peranza is still a bit dizzy, and also frightened, she knows very well that she's not in Asmodia's league, let alone Pilar Pineda's.  She's not even second-circle, well, most students aren't, but Asmodia and Pilar are - and Ione Sala, who, twisting her head around, Peranza can see curled up in a corner unconscious, definitely also is, even if she's not as overtly scary as the others -

Peranza realizes, then, that whatever is happening around her, she does not actually belong in this group, and is probably going to die horribly quite soon.