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They land in the heat of a summer day in Sothis, right outside the gleaming Black Dome that is the shell of the giant beetle Ulumut. It towers over the city; it'd be tall even in dath ilan. And suddenly there's the sensation of - being plunged into ice cold water, or flung through the air at terrifying speed, or being scoured by a blast of energy - - and the accompanying sensation of something darting around the scouring forces, tugging, pulling, cushioning -

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They land in the heat of a summer day in Sothis, right outside the gleaming Black Dome that is the shell of the giant beetle Ulumut. It towers over the city; it'd be tall even in dath ilan.

 

And suddenly there's the sensation of - being plunged into ice cold water, or flung through the air at terrifying speed, or being scoured by a blast of energy -

 

- and the accompanying sensation of something darting around the scouring forces, tugging, pulling, cushioning -

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They land in the heat of a summer day in Sothis, right outside the gleaming Black Dome that is the shell of the giant beetle Ulunat. It towers over the city; it'd be tall even in dath ilan.

 

And suddenly there's the sensation of - being plunged into ice cold water, or flung through the air at terrifying speed, or being scoured by a blast of energy -

 

- and the accompanying sensation of something darting around the scouring forces, tugging, pulling, cushioning -