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The Most High has apparently decided that Asmodia is cleared to know who Broom's god actually is; it's apparently "Otolmens", the god of preventing the universe's inconsistencies from destroying it while all the other gods run around making Her work harder.  Oh, Aspexia Rugatonn doesn't quite describe Otolmens that way, in so many words.  But it's kind of... obvious.

Keltham must not be told this, because you don't want to go around suggesting to people that they might have the capability to destroy the universe and steer their thoughts in that direction; Keltham must be allowed to think that Broom's god just works to prevent Wish spells gone awry and lesser such disasters.

This also feels obvious?  Asmodia had completed and Predicted the thought before she even got to that section of the letter.

(shielded:)

Otolmens couldn't possibly be her sponsor, could She?  It - doesn't feel - somehow - like a sort of thing that Otolmens would do...

Still, it doesn't actually need to be the case that - if each of the Special Girls corresponds to some god involved in this, if that's how tropes work, then maybe Otolmens is the one that Asmodia corresponds to?  Even if that doesn't make Otolmens the one who saved her in Hell and to whom Asmodia owes fealty?

Asmodia will think about it.

If there's someone somewhere in all the universe who cares about her - then Asmodia wouldn't want to see that universe destroyed.

"Otolmia" doesn't have a bad ring to it, either.

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The Most High has apparently decided that Asmodia is cleared to know who Broom's god actually is: "Otolmens", the god of preventing the universe's inconsistencies from destroying it while all the other gods run around making Her work harder.  Oh, Aspexia Rugatonn doesn't quite describe Otolmens that way, in so many words.  But it's kind of... obvious.

Keltham must not be told this, because you don't want to go around suggesting to people that they might have the capability to destroy the universe and steer their thoughts in that direction; Keltham must be allowed to think that Broom's god just works to prevent Wish spells gone awry and lesser such disasters.

This also feels obvious?  Asmodia had completed and Predicted the thought before she even got to that section of the letter.

(shielded:)

Otolmens couldn't possibly be her sponsor, could She?  It - doesn't feel - somehow - like a sort of thing that Otolmens would do...

Still, it doesn't actually need to be the case that - if each of the Special Girls corresponds to some god involved in this, if that's how tropes work, then maybe Otolmens is the one that Asmodia corresponds to?  Even if that doesn't make Otolmens the one who saved her in Hell and to whom Asmodia owes fealty?

Asmodia will think about it.

If there's someone somewhere in all the universe who cares about her - then Asmodia wouldn't want to see that universe destroyed.

"Otolmia" doesn't have a bad ring to it, either.

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The Most High has apparently decided that Asmodia is cleared to know who Broom's god actually is: "Otolmens", the god of preventing the universe's inconsistencies from destroying it while all the other gods run around making Her work harder.  Oh, Aspexia Rugatonn doesn't quite describe Otolmens that way, in so many words.  But it's kind of... obvious.

Keltham must not be told this, because you don't want to go around suggesting to people that they might have the capability to destroy the universe and steer their thoughts in that direction; Keltham must be allowed to think that Broom's god just works to prevent Wish spells gone awry and lesser such disasters.

This also feels obvious?  Asmodia had completed and Predicted the thought before she even got to that section of the letter.

(shielded:)

Otolmens couldn't possibly be her sponsor, could She?  It - doesn't feel - somehow - like a sort of thing that Otolmens would do...

Still - if each of the Special Girls corresponds to some god involved in this, if that's how tropes work, then maybe Otolmens is the one that Asmodia corresponds to?  Even if that doesn't make Otolmens the one who saved her in Hell and to whom Asmodia owes gratitude or fealty?

Asmodia will think about it.

If there's someone somewhere in all the universe who cares about her - then Asmodia wouldn't want to see that universe destroyed.

"Otolmia" doesn't have a bad ring to it, either.