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It occurs to Asmodia only after she has spoken that this - well, she's not sure it's not progress on corrupting Keltham?  Him being encouraged to hold all power in his own hands?  But it... didn't feel quite like progress, somehow, on Sevar's plan.  Maybe bad things happen when a fake Asmodia speaks from her heart.  Hopefully not too much damage was done; Asmodia knows what it is like, now, to have a Plan to protect, and she wouldn't want to hurt Sevar's own Plan.

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It occurs to Asmodia only after she has spoken that - well, she's not sure it's not progress on corrupting Keltham, what just happened?  Him being encouraged to hold all power in his own hands?  But it... didn't feel quite like progress, somehow, on corrupting him.  Maybe bad things happen when a fake Asmodia speaks from her heart.

Hopefully not too much damage was done; Asmodia knows what it is like, now, to have a Plan to protect, and she wouldn't want to hurt Sevar's own Plan.

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It occurs to Asmodia only after she has spoken that - well, she's not sure it's not progress on corrupting Keltham, what just happened?  Him being encouraged to hold all power in his own hands, to be the only decider of who deserves what, and right in every argument about that?  But it... didn't feel quite like progress, somehow, on corrupting him.

Maybe bad things happen when a fake Asmodia speaks from her heart.

Hopefully not too much damage was done.  Asmodia knows what it is like, now, to have a Plan to protect, and she wouldn't want to hurt Sevar's own Plan.