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Tiny Keltham demanded to see the actual accounts of which 'essential public services' his share of the land-rent was getting spent on.

He was promptly provided with them, in easy-to-read format for children with lots of helpful pictures.  Lots of dath ilani children demand to see those accounts, at some point.

With great focus and concentration, tiny Keltham managed to read through twenty-two pages of that, before getting bored and running off to play outside.

(This placed him in the 97th percentile for how far most children read at that age.)

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Tiny Keltham demanded to see the actual accounts of which 'essential public services' his share of the land-rent was getting spent on.

He was promptly provided them, in easy-to-read format for children with lots of helpful pictures.  Lots of dath ilani children demand to see those accounts, at some point.

With great focus and concentration, tiny Keltham managed to read through twenty-two pages of that, before getting bored and running off to play outside.

(This placed him in the 97th percentile for how far most children read at that age.)

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Tiny Keltham demanded to see the actual accounts of which 'essential public services' his share of the land-rent was getting spent on.

He was promptly provided them, in easy-to-read format for children with lots of helpful pictures.  Lots of dath ilani children demand to see those accounts, at some point.

With great focus and concentration, tiny Keltham managed to read through twenty-two pages of that, before getting bored and running off to play.

(This placed him in the 97th percentile for how far most children read at that age.)