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"That would be an excellent story if the goal was to make Keltham believe in tropes."

"You know, if we're going for shallow stories with deeper trope stories behind them, I'd go with, there was a boy who blackmailed me about being Nethysian and forced sex out of me, deeper story, that boy was my brother.  It would explain the searing hatred and desire to watch him slowly suffer and die, if that showed up in Detect Desires at some point."

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"That would be an excellent story if the goal was to make Keltham believe in tropes."

"You know, if we're going for shallow stories with deeper trope stories behind them, I'd go with, there was a boy who blackmailed me about being Nethysian and forced sex out of me, deeper story, that boy was my brother.  It would explain my searing hatred and desire to watch him slowly suffer and die, if that showed up in Detect Desires at some point."

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"That would be an excellent story if the goal was to make Keltham believe in tropes."

"You know, if we're going for shallow stories with deeper trope stories behind them, I'd go with, there was a boy who blackmailed me about being Nethysian and forced sex out of me, deeper story, that boy was my brother.  It would explain my searing hatred and desire to watch him slowly suffer and die, if that showed up in Detect Desires at some point.  Also why I'm not discussing any details and am not telling Keltham his name."