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"The treatment that Keltham improvised for you, yesterday, has an aspect I find truly fascinating.  It is not quite what I would have done, but - the part that your transcript showed your thoughts stumbling on, Keltham's instructions to you not to punish yourself, that you thought so much unlike Hell, is not entirely unlike what I would have done."

"To be precise, I would have told you that I was going to read your thoughts and punish you as I deemed appropriate and you were neither required nor allowed to punish yourself.  It is, in fact, an appropriate instruction when the problem you are trying to solve is a tangle of somebody's thoughts getting in the way of themselves, and your method is cutting the tangle with pain applied from without."

"The part that fascinates me is whether Keltham arriving at the same answer, and with far less experience than it took me to reach it, indicates that the way in which he tortured you is Lawful in some way that even I'm not seeing."

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"The treatment that Keltham improvised for you, yesterday, has an aspect I find truly fascinating.  It is not quite what I would have done, but - the part that your transcript showed your thoughts stumbling on, Keltham's instructions to you not to punish yourself, that you thought so much unlike Hell, is not entirely unlike what I would have done."

"To be precise, I would have told you that I was going to read your thoughts and punish you as I deemed appropriate and you were neither required nor allowed to usurp my place and punish yourself.  It is, in fact, an appropriate instruction when the problem you are trying to solve is a tangle of somebody's thoughts getting in the way of themselves, and your method is cutting the tangle with pain applied from without."

"The part that fascinates me is whether Keltham arriving at the same answer, and with far less experience than it took me to reach it, indicates that the way in which he tortured you is Lawful in some way that even I'm not seeing."

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"The treatment that Keltham improvised for you, yesterday, has an aspect I find truly fascinating.  It is not quite what I would have done, but - the part that your transcript showed your thoughts stumbling on, Keltham's instructions to you not to punish yourself, that you thought so much unlike Hell, is not entirely unlike what I would have done."

"To be precise, I would have told you that I was going to read your thoughts and punish you as I deemed appropriate and you were neither required nor allowed to usurp my place and punish yourself.  It is, in fact, an appropriate instruction when the problem you are trying to solve is a tangle of somebody's thoughts getting in the way of themselves, and your method is cutting the tangle with pain applied from without."

"Keltham seemingly arrived at nearly the same answer, and with far less experience than it took me to reach it.  The question that fascinates me is whether this indicates that the way in which Keltham tortured you is Lawful in some way I cannot see."

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"The treatment that Keltham improvised for you, yesterday, has an aspect I find truly fascinating.  It is not quite what I would have done, but - the part that your transcript showed your thoughts stumbling on, Keltham's instructions to you not to punish yourself, that you thought so much unlike Hell, is strangely like what I would have done."

"To be precise, I would have told you that I was going to read your thoughts and punish you as I deemed appropriate, and you were neither required nor allowed to usurp my place and punish yourself.  It is, in fact, an appropriate instruction when the problem you are trying to solve is a tangle of somebody's thoughts getting in the way of themselves, and your method is cutting the tangle with pain applied from without."

"Keltham seemingly arrived at nearly the same answer, and with far less experience than it took me to reach it.  The question that fascinates me is whether this indicates that the way in which Keltham tortured you is Lawful in some way I cannot see."