Message to Sevar:  I fear what the tropes would make of it.  I fear the results if we try to replace the asexual who watches it all, and now also controls the game, with Keltham's already-defeated rival for your heart.

To Sevar alone:  I fear what the tropes would make of it.  I fear the results if we try to replace the asexual who watches it all, and now also controls the game, with Keltham's already-defeated rival for your heart.

To Sevar alone:  I fear what the tropes would make of it.  I fear the results if we try to replace the asexual, who watches it all and now also controls the game, beginning from a disfavored position but rising rapidly, who is learning Keltham's own Law to wield against him, with Keltham's already-defeated rival for your heart.

To Sevar alone:  I fear what the tropes would make of it.  I fear the results if we try to replace the asexual - who watches it all and now also controls the game, beginning from a disfavored position but rising rapidly, who is learning Keltham's own Law to wield against him - with Keltham's already-defeated rival for your heart.