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"My thought was that for you to do this thing, without Keltham's knowledge, would make this story irrevocably a dath ilani tragedy.  Even if he triumphed in all other ways, his triumph would be poisoned, if we did as I suggest.  Then, with the final trend of the story fixed in fate, we can proceed to ensure it is a very great tragedy indeed."

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"My thought was that for you to do this thing, without Keltham's knowledge, would make this story irrevocably a dath ilani tragedy.  Even if he triumphed in all other ways, his triumph would be poisoned, if we did as I suggest.  Then, with the final trend of the story fixed in fate, we can proceed to ensure it is a very great tragedy indeed."