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The fortress is not, by and large, as pretty as an archduke's villa.  Not even close.

It does have the advantage that it's being explicitly renovated, on a somewhat larger Otolmens-funded budget than before.  Parts have hastily redesigned for something like the real uses to which this fortress will be put.

If you leave the library-adjacent dining area, and go up a flight of stairs, there's a hastily-constructed but already-slightly-pretty private dining area, with a lockable door and quieting spell, three comfortable chairs around a small decorative table, an enchanted window that looks out on the ocean but doesn't let out any light the other way, and a secret door that leads to a soundproofed cuddleroom.

It is the Keltham Seduction Room.  Somebody literally put that name on the first edition of the fortress layout map that went up in Maillol's 'official' office, the one Keltham knows about, along with the secret cuddleroom explicitly marked, and the mistake was barely caught before Keltham got a look at this official map.

The girls had in fact not been explicitly authorized to know about this architectural feature, until approved for the use of some particular seduction operation.  Unfortunately, the first person to spot the map error as such was Paxti.  Now they all know, and furthermore, don't know this was supposed to be a secret.

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The fortress is not, by and large, as pretty as an archduke's villa.  Not even close.

It does have the advantage that it's being explicitly renovated, on a somewhat larger Otolmens-funded budget than before.  Parts have been hastily redesigned for something like the real uses to which this fortress will be put.

If you leave the library-adjacent dining area, and go up a narrow spiral of stairs, there's a hastily-constructed but already-slightly-pretty private dining area, with a lockable door and quieting spell, three comfortable chairs around a small decorative table, an enchanted window that looks out on the ocean but doesn't let out any light the other way, and a secret door that leads to a soundproofed cuddleroom.

It is the Keltham Seduction Room.  Somebody literally put that name on the first edition of the fortress layout map that went up in Maillol's 'official' office, the one Keltham knows about, along with the secret cuddleroom explicitly marked, and the mistake was barely caught before Keltham got a look at this official map.

The girls had in fact not been explicitly authorized to know about this architectural feature, until approved for the use of some particular seduction operation.  Unfortunately, the first person to spot the map error as such was Paxti.  Now they all know, and furthermore, don't know this was supposed to be a secret.

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The fortress is not, by and large, as pretty as an archduke's villa.  Not even close.

It does have the advantage that it's being explicitly renovated, on a somewhat larger Otolmens-funded budget than before.  Parts have been hastily redesigned for something like the real uses to which this fortress will be put.

If you leave the library-adjacent dining area, and go up a narrow spiral of stairs, there's a hastily-constructed but already-slightly-pretty private dining area, with a lockable door and quieting spell, three comfortable chairs around a small decorative table, an enchanted window that looks out on the ocean but doesn't let out any light the other way, and a secret door that leads to a soundproofed cuddleroom.

It is the Keltham Seduction Room.  Somebody literally put that name on the first edition of the fortress layout map that went up in Maillol's 'official' office, the one Keltham knows about, along with the secret cuddleroom explicitly marked, and the mistake was barely caught before Keltham got a look at this official map.

The girls had in fact not been explicitly authorized to know about this architectural feature, until approved for the use of some particular seduction operation.  Unfortunately, the first person to spot the map error as such was Paxti.  Now they all know, and furthermore, don't know this was supposed to be a secret.