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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"If anything, I should say that Pilar is a little too greedy about that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for her to be the one giving orders; I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar that much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even then, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Do you understand?  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and then we tell her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"If anything, I should say that Pilar is a little too greedy about that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for her to be the one giving orders; I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar that much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even then, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and then we tell her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"Those such as Pilar can be too greedy about chasing that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for them to use their own initiative; I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar that much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even then, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and then we tell her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"Those such as Pilar can be too greedy about chasing that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for them to use their own initiative; I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar that much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even after using her own initiative, and erring, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and then we tell her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"Those such as Pilar can be too greedy about chasing that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for them to use their own initiative; I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar that much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even after using her own initiative, and erring, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and implicitly we have told her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true, and once punished she is finished.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"Those such as Pilar can be too greedy about chasing that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for them to use their own initiative.  I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar so much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even after using her own initiative, and erring, it is possible for Pilar to be made right.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and implicitly we have told her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true, and once punished she is finished.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"

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"Oh, it almost always is."

"But not when you are given an order and follow it correctly."

"Those such as Pilar can be too greedy about chasing that, even when it might better serve Asmodeus for them to use their own initiative.  I expect this was among the Most High's thoughts when she granted Pilar so much authority in the palace two days ago."

"But even after using her own initiative, and erring, it is possible for Pilar to be made clean.  Because we, her superiors, tell her that she erred, we tell her how much punishment she has incurred, and she undergoes that punishment, and implicitly we have told her she deserves no more punishment than that, and therefore it is true, and once punished she is finished.  You have done this for her; did you not understand what you were doing?"