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"If Keltham is the sort of man to care about that at all, one may hope he is more aware than Osirion that it may lie within a country's power to give him the bodies of women, but that their affection he must win for himself regardless.  And if he is not so aware, well, he is then in some other fashion still a man whom a woman of Irori would respect enough to look to as her teacher.  Sevar is not simply exploiting Keltham for his knowledge; she regards herself as a student of his ways."

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"If Keltham is the sort of man to care about that at all, one may hope he is more aware than Osirion that it may lie within a country's power to give him the bodies of women, but that their affection he must win for himself regardless.  And if he is not so aware, well, he is then in some other fashion still a man whom a woman of Irori would respect enough to look to as her teacher.  Let me think on the meaning of the word and the vision... yes.  Sevar is not simply exploiting Keltham for his knowledge; she regards herself as a student of his ways."

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"If Keltham is the sort of man to care about that at all, one may hope he is more aware than Osirion that it may lie within a country's power to give him the bodies of women, but that their affection he must win for himself regardless.  And if he is not so aware, well, he is then in some other fashion still a man whom a woman of Irori would respect enough to look to as her teacher.  Let me think on the meaning of the word and the vision... yes.  Sevar is not simply or only exploiting Keltham for his knowledge; she regards herself as a student of his ways."

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"If Keltham is the sort of man to care about that at all, one may hope he is more aware than Osirion that it may lie within a country's power to give him the bodies of women, but that their affection he must win for himself regardless.  And if he is not so aware, well, he is yet elsewise a man whom a woman of Irori would respect enough to look to as her teacher.  Let me think on the meaning of the word and the vision... yes.  Sevar is not simply or only exploiting Keltham for his knowledge; she regards herself as a student of his ways."

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"If Keltham is the sort of man to care about that at all, one may hope he is more aware than Osirion that it may lie within a country's power to give him the bodies of women, but that their affection he must win for himself regardless.  And if he is not so aware, well, he is yet elsewise a man whom a woman of Irori would respect enough to look to as her teacher.  Let me think on the meaning of the word and the vision... yes.  Sevar is not simply or only exploiting Keltham for his knowledge; she regards herself as a student of his ways."