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"He is out of place and striving to overcome that.  Another world, another time, either would fit."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham.  His displacement drastically altered his Way, has half become his Way now."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham.  His displacement drastically altered his Way."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham.  His displacement has halfway become his Way."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham.  His displacement has half become his Way."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"

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"Keltham is out of his accustomed place, and striving to overcome the disadvantage at which that places him, and also striving to use - what that makes him.  Another world, another time, either would fit.  I suppose that to gain a strange power might also remove a man from his accustomed place in the order of things, but that does not feel right, it is not enough to describe Keltham."

"What sort of spectacular powers?"