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"Are there any obvious flaws to you in this arrangement?  Do not assume that I am fully familiar with all the details of these workings; if I was, I wouldn't have needed to ask this much."

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"Are there any obvious flaws to you in this arrangement?  Do not assume that I am fully familiar with all the details of these workings; if I was, I wouldn't have needed to ask this much."

Something about the way she's phrasing that feels like dath ilani influence... well, that's not necessarily a bad thing.