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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else permanently owning her soul does not sit well whether it is that has always been inside Keltham.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else permanently owning her soul does not sit well with whatever it is that has always been inside Keltham.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else permanently owning her soul does not sit well with whatever it is that has always been inside Keltham.  They're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else permanently owning her soul does not sit well with whatever it is that has always been inside Keltham.

And they're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else permanently owning her soul does not sit well with this new gendertrope that has always been inside Keltham.

And they're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else owning her soul does not sit well with this new gendertrope that has always been inside Keltham.

And they're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else owning her soul, even if they don't own her, does not sit well with this new gendertrope that has always been inside Keltham.

And they're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.

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That said, Carissa is also right that the notion of somebody else 'owning her soul', even if they don't own her, does not sit well with this new gendertrope that has always been inside Keltham.

And they're living in a world of low probability, and Keltham does not want to close off the prospect of their relationship escalating that far in time.