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"This may be a dumb question, but is there any connection, however distant, between the snacks and the Elysium thing?"

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"This may be a dumb question, but is there any connection, however distant, between the snacks and the Elysium thing?"

Keltham previously knew 2 facts about Pilar, her trip and her fetish, and he was already suspecting there would ultimately prove to be some connection between them (trope-wise, not causally).  Now he has generalized a third fact:  Pilar has candy.

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"This may be a dumb question, but is there any connection, however distant, between the snacks and the Elysium thing?"

Keltham previously knew 2 facts about Pilar, her trip and her fetish, and he was already suspecting there would ultimately prove to be some connection between them (trope-wise, not causally).  Now he has noticed a third fact:  Pilar has candy.

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"This may be a dumb question, but is there any connection, however distant, between the snacks and the Elysium thing?"

Keltham previously knew 2 facts about Pilar, her trip and her fetish, and he was already suspecting there would ultimately prove to be some connection between them (trope-wise, not causally).  Now he has noticed a third fact repeated twice:  Pilar has candy.