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Abrogail's transcript contains a censored section right at the most exciting part about the Second Law, with notes saying that Keltham thought things about other people's knowledge of these truths driving them insane and possibly collapsing the universe, that most of his thoughts were incomprehensible ideas with no remote conceptual neighbors in any language that Abrogail knows, and that the parts that did make it through were incredibly fucking disturbing.  Abrogail is obviously saying this because she knows how terribly curious it will make Sevar about the one part she most wanted to know, but it is also true, and Rugatonn requires further thought on whether Sevar gets to see this.

Abrogail has included a more detailed explanation of why Sevar is being tortured, with particular torture codes from her sheet being noted at particular points that all sum up to the total amount of torture she's getting.

The most severe torture code is annotated on the section where Keltham thought about his secret plan to establish a fully legible meta-level signal via the no-verbal-objections order.  This looks like a huge setback for their corruption plans.  If Sevar noticed this at all, which was her job, then she didn't think about it in words and it didn't show up in her thought transcript, meaning Abrogail got blindsided here.  Abrogail isn't sure how to recover, Sevar didn't say anything to the effect of how most masochists wouldn't go along with it even if Sevar herself is fine, or how she could do it for a month no problem but after any longer of not being allowed to scream and beg she would probably start to feel sad.  Maybe when Keltham gets to the appropriate point Sevar can confess that she's starting to feel sad.  Keltham is unfortunately explicitly suspicious that Cheliax is trying to lure him into rape.  But even if Sevar's opinion is that any objection to Keltham's plan would have made him too suspicious, Sevar didn't apparently notice, and definitely didn't report it explicitly.  Bad Sevar, go to your torture room.

The second-largest torture code is for Sevar thinking about how the Queen of Cheliax was being stupid for saying a 'worse version' than the one Sevar suggested.  When, in fact, the Queen of Cheliax has higher Perception than Sevar can fucking dream of and it was warning her off Sevar's version verbatim, possibly because Keltham would've been able to identify it as coming from Sevar.  Sevar's failure to imagine that the Queen of Cheliax could have any good reason for presuming to not do exactly what she said reveals an actual problem of subordination here and that's why this punishment is severe.  Thinking about lighting Abrogail on fire despite knowing you might get punished for thinking that was not the problem, that's just flirting and will be dealt with separately.

The third-largest torture code, also appearing in the original sum of codes Carissa was given, is the fee for making the fucking Queen of Cheliax spell all this out for Sevar in the annotations because Sevar apparently cannot imagine her Queen ever being professional about anything.

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Abrogail's transcript contains a censored section right at the most exciting part about the Second Law, with notes saying that Keltham thought things about other people's knowledge of these truths driving them insane and possibly collapsing the universe, that most of his thoughts were incomprehensible ideas with no remote conceptual neighbors in any language that Abrogail knows, and that the parts that did make it through were incredibly fucking disturbing.  Abrogail is obviously saying this because she knows how terribly curious it will make Sevar about the one part she most wanted to know, but it is also true, and Rugatonn requires further thought on whether Sevar gets to see this.

Abrogail has included a more detailed explanation of why Sevar is being tortured, with particular torture codes from her sheet being noted at particular points that all sum up exactly to the total amount of torture she received in her original note.

The most severe torture code is annotated on the section where Keltham thought about his secret plan to establish a fully legible meta-level signal via the no-verbal-objections order.  This looks like a huge setback for their corruption plans.  If Sevar noticed this at all, which was her job, then she didn't think about it in words and it didn't show up in her thought transcript, meaning Abrogail got blindsided here.  Abrogail isn't sure how to recover, Sevar didn't say anything to the effect of how most masochists wouldn't go along with it even if Sevar herself is fine, or how she could do it for a month no problem but after any longer of not being allowed to scream and beg she would probably start to feel sad.  Maybe when Keltham gets to the appropriate point Sevar can confess that she's starting to feel sad.  Keltham is unfortunately explicitly suspicious that Cheliax is trying to lure him into rape.  But even if Sevar's opinion is that any objection to Keltham's plan would have made him too suspicious, Sevar didn't apparently notice, and definitely didn't report it explicitly.  Bad Sevar, go to your torture room.

The second-largest torture code is for Sevar thinking about how the Queen of Cheliax was being stupid for saying a 'worse version' than the one Sevar suggested.  When, in fact, the Queen of Cheliax has higher Perception than Sevar can fucking dream of and it was warning her off Sevar's version verbatim, possibly because Keltham would've been able to identify it as coming from Sevar.  Sevar's failure to imagine that the Queen of Cheliax could have any good reason for presuming to not do exactly what she said reveals an actual problem of subordination here and that's why this punishment is severe.  Thinking about lighting Abrogail on fire despite knowing you might get punished for thinking that was not the problem, that's just flirting and will be dealt with separately.

The third-largest torture code, also appearing in the original sum of codes Carissa was given, is the fee for making the fucking Queen of Cheliax spell all this out for Sevar in the annotations because Sevar apparently cannot imagine her Queen ever being professional about anything.

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Abrogail's transcript contains a censored section right at the most exciting part about the Second Law, with notes saying that Keltham thought things about other people's knowledge of these truths driving them insane and possibly collapsing the universe, that most of his thoughts were incomprehensible ideas with no remote conceptual neighbors in any language that Abrogail knows, and that the parts that did make it through were incredibly fucking disturbing.  Abrogail is obviously saying this because she knows how terribly curious it will make Sevar about the one part she most wanted to know, but it is also true, and Rugatonn requires further thought on whether Sevar gets to see this.

Abrogail has included a more detailed explanation of why Sevar is being tortured, with particular torture codes from her sheet being noted at particular points that all sum up exactly to the total amount of torture she received in her original note.

The most severe torture code is annotated on the section where Keltham thought about his secret plan to establish a fully legible meta-level signal via the no-verbal-objections order.  This looks like a huge setback for their corruption plans.  If Sevar noticed this at all, which was her job, then she didn't think about it in words and it didn't show up in her thought transcript, meaning Abrogail got blindsided here.  Abrogail isn't sure how to recover, Sevar didn't say anything to the effect of how most masochists wouldn't go along with it even if Sevar herself is fine, or how she could do it for a month no problem but after any longer of not being allowed to scream and beg she would probably start to feel sad.  Maybe when Keltham gets to the appropriate point Sevar can confess that she's starting to feel sad.  Keltham is unfortunately explicitly suspicious that Cheliax is trying to lure him into rape.  But even if Sevar's opinion is that any objection to Keltham's plan would have made him too suspicious, Sevar didn't apparently notice, and definitely didn't report it explicitly.  Bad Sevar, go to your torture room.

The second-largest torture code is for Sevar thinking about how the Queen of Cheliax was being stupid for saying a 'worse version' than the one Sevar suggested.  When, in fact, the Queen of Cheliax has higher Perception than Sevar can fucking dream of and it was warning her off Sevar's version verbatim, possibly because Keltham would've been able to identify it as coming from Sevar.  Sevar's failure to imagine that the Queen of Cheliax could have any good reason for presuming to not do exactly what she said reveals an actual problem of subordination here and that's why this punishment is severe.  Thinking about lighting Abrogail on fire despite knowing you might get punished for thinking that was not the problem, that's just flirting and will be dealt with separately.

The third-largest torture code, also appearing in the original sum of codes Carissa was given, is the fee for making the fucking Queen of Cheliax spell all this out for Sevar in the annotations because Sevar apparently cannot imagine her Queen ever being professional about anything.

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Abrogail's transcript contains a censored section right at the most exciting part about the Second Law, with notes saying that Keltham thought things about other people's knowledge of these truths driving them insane and possibly collapsing the universe, that most of his thoughts were incomprehensible ideas with no remote conceptual neighbors in any language that Abrogail knows, and that the parts that did make it through were incredibly fucking disturbing.  Abrogail is obviously saying this because she knows how terribly curious it will make Sevar about the one part she most wanted to know, but it is also true, and Rugatonn requires further thought on whether Sevar gets to see this.

Abrogail has included a more detailed explanation of why Sevar is being tortured, with particular torture codes from her sheet being noted at particular points that all sum up exactly to the total amount of torture she received in her original note.

The most severe torture code is annotated on the section where Keltham thought about his secret plan to establish a fully legible meta-level signal via the no-verbal-objections order.  This looks like a huge setback for their corruption plans.  If Sevar noticed this at all, which was her job, then she didn't think about it in words and it didn't show up in her thought transcript, meaning Abrogail got blindsided here.  Abrogail isn't sure how to recover, Sevar didn't say anything to the effect of how most masochists wouldn't go along with it even if Sevar herself is fine, or how she could do it for a month no problem but after any longer of not being allowed to scream and beg she would probably start to feel sad.  Maybe when Keltham gets to the appropriate point Sevar can confess that she's starting to feel sad.  Keltham is unfortunately explicitly suspicious that Cheliax is trying to lure him into rape.  But even if Sevar's opinion is that any objection to Keltham's plan would have made him too suspicious, Sevar didn't apparently notice, and definitely didn't report it explicitly.  Bad Sevar, go to your torture room.

The second-largest torture code is for Sevar thinking about how the Queen of Cheliax was being stupid for saying a 'worse version' than the one Sevar suggested.  When, in fact, the Queen of Cheliax has higher Perception than Sevar can fucking dream of and it was warning her off Sevar's version verbatim, possibly because Keltham would've been able to identify it as coming from Sevar.  Sevar's failure to imagine that the Queen of Cheliax could have any good reason for presuming to not do exactly what Sevar said reveals an actual problem of subordination here and that's why this punishment is severe.  Thinking about lighting Abrogail on fire despite knowing you might get punished for thinking that was not the problem, that's just flirting and will be dealt with separately.

The third-largest torture code, also appearing in the original sum of codes Carissa was given, is the fee for making the fucking Queen of Cheliax spell all this out for Sevar in the annotations because Sevar apparently cannot imagine her Queen ever being professional about anything.

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Abrogail's transcript contains a censored section right at the most exciting part about the Second Law, with notes saying that Keltham thought things about other people's knowledge of these truths driving them insane and possibly collapsing the universe, that most of his thoughts were incomprehensible ideas with no remote conceptual neighbors in any language that Abrogail knows, and that the parts that did make it through were incredibly fucking disturbing.  Abrogail is obviously saying this because she knows how terribly curious it will make Sevar about the one part she most wanted to know, but it is also true, and Rugatonn requires further thought on whether Sevar gets to see this.

Abrogail has included a more detailed explanation of why Sevar is being tortured, with particular torture codes from her sheet being noted at particular points that all sum up exactly to the total amount of torture she received in her original note.

The most severe torture code is annotated on the section where Keltham thought about his secret plan to establish a fully legible meta-level signal via the no-verbal-objections order.  This looks like a huge setback for their corruption plans.  If Sevar noticed this at all, which was her job, then she didn't think about it in words and it didn't show up in her thought transcript, meaning Abrogail got blindsided here.  Abrogail isn't sure how to recover, Sevar didn't say anything to the effect of how most masochists wouldn't go along with it even if Sevar herself is fine, or how she could do it for a month no problem but after any longer of not being allowed to scream and beg she would probably start to feel sad.  Maybe when Keltham gets to the appropriate point Sevar can confess that she's starting to feel sad.  Keltham is unfortunately explicitly suspicious that Cheliax is trying to lure him into rape.  But even if Sevar's opinion is that any objection to Keltham's plan would have made him too suspicious, Sevar didn't apparently notice, and definitely didn't report it explicitly.  Bad Sevar, go to your torture room.

The second-worst torture code is for Sevar thinking about how the Queen of Cheliax was being stupid for saying a 'worse version' than the one Sevar suggested.  When, in fact, the Queen of Cheliax has higher Perception than Sevar can fucking dream of and it was warning her off Sevar's version verbatim, possibly because Keltham would've been able to identify it as coming from Sevar.  Sevar's failure to imagine that the Queen of Cheliax could have any good reason for presuming to not do exactly what Sevar said reveals an actual problem of subordination here and that's why this punishment is severe.  Thinking about lighting Abrogail on fire despite knowing you might get punished for thinking that was not the problem, that's just flirting and will be dealt with separately.

The third-severest torture code, also appearing in the original sum of codes Carissa was given, is the fee for making the fucking Queen of Cheliax spell all this out for Sevar in the annotations because Sevar apparently cannot imagine her Queen ever being professional about anything.