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"That sort of talk has been the approach taken by the Queen's closest advisors for too long a time, and I'm not sure it's really working at this point."

"Keltham, you're missing a lot of cultural context here, but - among the approaches that had occurred to me, if things developed in that direction of greater complication - was seeing if the Queen could rent Sevar from you for a few hours for five hundred gold pieces and get it out of her system.  Please don't object that you don't own Sevar, the point is that this is a recognized practice when somebody like Sevar gives herself to you, and the fact that the Queen would be renting Sevar from you means that she isn't stealing Sevar from you or fighting with you over Sevar and the whole thing is occurring in a way that acknowledges Sevar is yours and not the Queen's and the Queen only gets to have her because you said so."

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"That sort of talk has been the approach taken by the Queen's closest advisors for too long a time, and I'm not sure it's really working at this point."

"Keltham, you're missing a lot of context here on how submission works, but - among the approaches that had occurred to me, if things developed in that direction of greater complication - was seeing if the Queen could rent Sevar from you for a few hours for five hundred gold pieces and get it out of her system.  Please don't object that you don't own Sevar, the point is that this is a recognized practice when somebody like Sevar gives herself to you, and the fact that the Queen would be renting Sevar from you means that she isn't stealing Sevar from you or fighting with you over Sevar and the whole thing is occurring in a way that acknowledges Sevar is yours and not the Queen's and the Queen only gets to have her because you said so."

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"That sort of talk has been the approach taken by the Queen's closest advisors for too long a time, and I'm not sure it's really working at this point."

"Keltham, you're missing a lot of context here on how submission works, but - among the approaches that had occurred to me, if things developed in that direction of greater complication - was seeing if the Queen could rent Sevar from you for a few hours for five hundred gold pieces and get it out of her system.  Please don't object that you don't own Sevar, the point is that this is a recognized practice when somebody like Sevar gives herself to you, and the fact that the Queen would be renting Sevar from you means that she isn't stealing Sevar from you or fighting with you over Sevar and the whole thing is occurring in a way that acknowledges Sevar is yours and not the Queen's and the Queen only gets to have her because you said so -"

"Did that - make any sense to you, at all, or do I need to back up, I'm sorry if that's all coming on too quickly."

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"That sort of talk has been the approach taken by the Queen's closest advisors for too long a time, and I'm not sure it's really working at this point."

"Keltham, you're missing a lot of context here on how submission works, but - among the approaches that had occurred to me, if things developed in that direction of greater complication - was seeing if the Queen could rent Sevar from you for a few hours for five hundred gold pieces and get it out of her system.  Please don't object that you don't own Sevar, the point is that this is a recognized practice when somebody like Sevar gives herself to you, and the fact that the Queen would be renting Sevar from you means that she isn't stealing Sevar from you or fighting with you over Sevar and the whole thing is occurring in a way that acknowledges Sevar is yours and not the Queen's and the Queen only gets to have her because you said so -"

"Did that - make any sense to you, at all, or do I need to back up, I'm sorry if that's all coming on too quickly -"

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"That sort of talk has been the approach taken by the Queen's closest advisors for too long a time, and I'm not sure it's really working at this point."

"Keltham, you're missing a lot of context here on how submission works, but - among the approaches that had occurred to me, if things developed in that direction of greater complication - was seeing if the Queen could rent Sevar from you for a half-day for five hundred gold pieces and get it out of her system.  Please don't object that you don't own Sevar, the point is that this is a recognized practice when somebody like Sevar gives herself to you, and the fact that the Queen would be renting Sevar from you means that she isn't stealing Sevar from you or fighting with you over Sevar and the whole thing is occurring in a way that acknowledges Sevar is yours and not the Queen's and the Queen only gets to have her because you said so -"

"Did that - make any sense to you, at all, or do I need to back up, I'm sorry if that's all coming on too quickly -"