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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.  Molten-iron heat on one finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)

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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.  Molten-iron heat on her index finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)

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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.

  Molten-iron heat on her index finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)

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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.

Torture details spoilered.  Molten-iron heat on her index finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)

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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.

Torture details spoilered.   Molten-iron heat on her index finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)

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As the bag comes halfway open, it leaps up around Carissa's left hand, over her wrist, snapping tight.

Most sexual masochists prefer a gradual buildup of their pain.  This bag is the opposite of that, as if somebody was trying to make the experience unpleasant even for a masochist, maybe as a challenge.

Torture details spoilered.   Molten-iron heat on her index finger, instantly there from zero buildup, lasting for maybe a quarter-minute, and then it cuts out and is replaced by the sensation of her middle finger being flayed, which goes on for another quarter-minute.

(It's probably not actually molten iron; real molten iron would burn out nerves quickly and end up feeling mostly like the pain of an amputation.)