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Were you watching myself and Carissa before?  Keltham doesn't ask it, although the thought of being watched while he was hurting Carissa seems like far more of an intimate violation than being spied on during ordinary sex, because that is a personal issue and this is about world-scale interfactional treaties...

He actually is feeling wounded about that violation of privacy, injured, angry if it was true.  Huh, imagine that.

"I'm not really happy with this version of the spying thing," Keltham says.  "How about if, from now on, you monitor my lessons openly, or don't show up at all?  And my god won't have to give me more revealing-hidden-people spells, and we won't have to burn effort on opposing each other."

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Were you watching myself and Carissa before?  Keltham doesn't ask it, although the thought of being watched while he was hurting Carissa seems like far more of an intimate violation than being spied on during ordinary sex.  He doesn't ask because that part is a personal issue and this is about world-scale interfactional treaties...

He actually is feeling wounded about that violation of privacy, injured, angry if it was true.  Huh, imagine that.

"I'm not really happy with this version of the spying thing," Keltham says.  "How about if, from now on, you monitor my lessons openly, or don't show up at all?  And my god won't have to give me more revealing-hidden-people spells, and we won't have to burn effort on opposing each other."

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Were you watching myself and Carissa before?  Keltham doesn't ask it, although the thought of being watched while he was hurting Carissa seems like far more of an intimate violation than being spied on during ordinary sex.  He doesn't ask because that part is a personal issue and this is about world-scale interfactional treaties...

He actually is feeling wounded about that violation of privacy, injured, angry if it was true.  Huh, imagine that.  Well, Keltham is not Good and he is allowed to do something about pursuing his own interests here.

"I'm not really happy with this version of the spying thing," Keltham says.  "How about if, from now on, you monitor my lessons openly, or don't show up at all?  And my god won't have to give me more revealing-hidden-people spells, and we won't have to burn effort on opposing each other."