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Keltham's roving eyes light on Carissa's armpit hairs.  Civilization has mastered biochemical control of hair; Keltham himself doesn't have hair anywhere he doesn't want to.  Most women of dath ilan do elect to switch off hair in armpits; Civilization tries to avert certain kinds of status-appearance contests that can only have a few winners and many losers, but everyone getting a simple treatment to choose their hair pattern is hardly that.  He - does see why women would choose that, now?  It doesn't look good on her, in his own decision and choice.

Keltham reaches down, wraps a single long armpit hair around his forefinger and pinches it between his forefinger and thumb, and then rips it out.

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Keltham's roving eyes light on Carissa's armpit hairs.  Civilization has mastered biochemical control of hair; Keltham himself doesn't have hair anywhere he doesn't want to.  Most women of dath ilan do elect to switch off hair in armpits; Civilization tries to avert certain kinds of status-appearance contests that can only have a few winners and many losers, but everyone getting a simple treatment to choose their hair pattern is hardly that.  He does see why a supermajority of Civilization's women would choose that, now.  It doesn't look good on Carissa, in his own decision and choice.

Keltham reaches down, wraps a single long armpit hair around his forefinger and pinches it between his forefinger and thumb, and then rips it out.