"I'd have to look it up to remember the exact phrasing but 'She was a submissive who understood little and knew little and had poor impulse control' is not how any dath ilani would ever describe a character, and anybody who had problems resembling that in real life would not be completely oblivious to the fact, and presumably submissives in reality have inner lives that do not entirely revolve around judging doms for suitability - if this book is not in some sense literary anime I will be very disturbed."

"I'd have to look it up to remember the exact phrasing but 'She was a submissive who understood little and knew little and had poor impulse control' is not how any dath ilani would ever describe a character, and anybody who had problems resembling that in real life would not be completely oblivious to the fact, and presumably submissives in reality have inner lives that do not entirely revolve around judging doms for suitability - if this book is not in some sense literary anime I will be very disturbed because their eyes are the wrong size relative to their mouths."

"I'd have to look it up to remember the exact phrasing but 'She was a submissive who understood little and knew little and had poor impulse control' is not how any dath ilani would ever describe a character, and anybody who had problems resembling that in real life would not be completely oblivious to the fact, and presumably submissives in reality have inner lives that do not entirely revolve around judging doms for suitability - if this book is not in some sense literary anime I will be very disturbed."