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Thellim arrived in a house instead of three hundred distanceunits underwater in the middle of the sea.  She arrived in the house of somebody who knew Isabella.  Maybe Isabella is - kindly enough - that Thellim could actually - talk her into - a different moral position?

 

Because if nobody like that exists anywhere in this world, her impossible quest is going to be very lonely and probably very short.

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Thellim arrived in a house instead of three hundred distanceunits underwater in the middle of the sea.  She arrived in the house of somebody who knew Isabella.  Maybe Isabella is - kindly enough - that Thellim could actually - talk her into - a different moral position?

 

Because if nobody like that exists anywhere in this world, Thellim's impossible quest is going to be very lonely and probably very short.

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Thellim arrived in a house instead of three hundred distanceunits underwater in the middle of the sea.  She arrived in the house of somebody who knew Isabella.  Maybe Isabella is - kindly enough - that Thellim could actually - talk her into a different moral position?

 

Because if nobody like that exists anywhere in this world, Thellim's impossible quest is going to be very lonely and probably very short.

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Thellim arrived in a house instead of three hundred distanceunits underwater in the middle of the sea.  She arrived in the house of somebody who knew Isabella.  Maybe both of those suspicious coincidences are meant to be helpful.  Maybe Isabella is - kindly enough - that Thellim could actually - talk her into a different moral position?

 

Because if nobody like that exists anywhere in this world, Thellim's impossible quest is going to be very lonely and probably very short.