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Stop.  Deep breaths.  She's not quite distressed enough to fall back on solid-core reasoning, but she is in literally another dimension and needs to be careful about jumping conclusions.  She is not necessarily the protagonist who got transported into a broken world in need of fixing through the power of clear thinking and good coordination; she may be the cautionary tale about the protagonist who jumped to conclusions about what was really going on.  Jackson didn't look unhappy or scared of Brian.

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Stop.  Deep breaths.  She's not quite distressed enough to fall back on solid-core reasoning, but she is in literally another dimension and needs to be careful about jumping to conclusions.  All her predictions have been horrible and that's not a good sign for her models being real.  She is not necessarily the protagonist who got transported into a broken world in need of fixing through the power of clear thinking and good coordination; she may be in a cautionary tale about protagonists who think they know what needs doing when they really, really don't.  Jackson didn't look unhappy or scared of Brian.