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As soon as the carriage door opens, a crossbow bolt will come out.  This one is from a higher-quality crossbow at nearly point-blank range.  It clips some of Bella's hair, and if the boy had guessed her location better, it might have wounded her before she could dodge far enough.

There is an angry teenage boy Bella's age here.  He drops the crossbow and begins to chant, in a way that feels like slightly different language bullshit to hear, "I offer you seven offerings of my mana, oh spirits of fire -"

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As soon as the carriage door opens, a crossbow bolt will come out.  This one is from a higher-quality crossbow at nearly point-blank range.  It clips some of Bella's hair, and if the boy had guessed her location better, it might have wounded her before she could dodge far enough.

There is an angry teenage boy Bella's age here.  He drops the crossbow and begins to chant, in a way that feels like slightly different language bullshit to hear, "I offer you seven offerings of my mana, spirits of fire -"

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As soon as the carriage door opens, a crossbow bolt will come out.  This one is from a higher-quality crossbow at nearly point-blank range.  It clips some of Bella's hair, and if the boy had guessed her location better, it might have wounded her before she could dodge far enough.

There is an angry teenage boy Bella's age here.  He drops the crossbow and begins to chant, in a way that feels like slightly different language bullshit to hear, "I offer you seven offerings of my mana, spirits of fire, to -"